I do believe that not only does all writing benefit from collaboration, but
all writers do as well. As long as the feedback is well-intentioned, writers
will grow and feel nurtured instead of attacked. As a middle school teacher,
this thought unfortunately leads to a possible negative side: students are not
always nice to one another, much less nurturing. As was mentioned by several of
you in the responses to the previous prompt, the "set up" for this
needs to be extensive and expectations and obligations for writing circles need
to be taught directly, modeled and reinforced.
Another benefit of writing circles is the actual “good” advice and
suggestions for writing. Ideas to improve upon a piece or take it in a different
direction, suggestions to clarify the reader’s confusion or rework organization
have all helped each one of us improve our writing at one time or another. But,
as in life, not all advice is sound advice. This is another challenge I can see
with writing circles. Especially in a mixed ability grouping, writers may
receive some irrelevant or “bad” advice. The trick will be to teach our
students how to consider and reflect upon all feedback, decide what is relevant
or possible for them to apply, and then pick and choose the direction they want
to take. It may be that the feedback they received is not a change they want to
pursue, but the interaction will provide them with a direction for future
writing or a perspective they had not considered.
Before I get into the many benefits of writing circles, another negative
would be the extremely reluctant writer/worker/learner. By 7th and 8th
grade, my students have a lot of experiences with writing and reading, some
good and others horrible. Some students have learned a sense of helplessness
that pervades their demeanor and makes them—well, reluctant is an optimistic
word for some. I can envision a challenge in writing circles will be including
these writers and encouraging their effort and participation. However, I’m
looking at writing circles as an opportunity to engage these challenging
students, hoping positive writing attitudes spread and stick like peanut
butter.
So, the benefits of positive feedback on a blossoming writer, contagious
positive writing attitudes, and strong advice for improvement are added to my
list that already includes: learning how to keep a conversation focused on an
educational topic—in this case writing, increasing writing stamina, student
choice, and set responsibilities and accountability for all participants in a
circle. Since these are all areas of focus for the writing environment in my
classroom, I am seriously looking forward to creating writing circles with my
students!
In reading your post, I am reminded of a phrase on page 19 in "Writing Circles" where it describes the "writing wounded." What a powerful description! I know many mathematically wounded children, as well. However, I am intrigued about how this methodology will work to help "heal" those who have been "wounded" by both peers and teachers, to write.
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